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Wednesday, 3 May 2017

Little chimp


The Little chimp was going Home But he saw a honey tree He went to it The Little chimp saw yellow stuff he Tasted some mmmm he Grand Lost And the bees were flying past Puppies were going to get the Honey back but the Monkey was Gone he was full He gave the rest to the Monkey The end


Tuesday, 2 May 2017

Mother duck


Mother duck sat in the tree and her 10 eggs hatch in the tree. Mother duck jump out of the tree with her baby ducks. 5 ducks ran away and mother duck had to find them.Daddy duck came back with 5 baby ducklings.

Wednesday, 12 April 2017

the lion and therabbit


I am hungry said the lion i am going to get a rabbit Roar he get a  rabbit it was a fat one he eat it he was a beer away  the lion went the beer didn't see the lion Coming the  lion eat ti.

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Tim and michael was going to play in the pool but  the pool was Doodle sow Tim and michael can’t play in the  pool  they went inside.

Friday, 7 April 2017

Eating Insects

Have you ever tasted a cricket before this morning Mrs Stickland said we were going to eat chocolate flavoured mud with crickets, I thought she was lying!


I was shocked when I saw it had eyes and I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough  to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like cornflakes.


I’m not sure how many i ate but it was a lot. Luckily Mrs Stickland had chocolate mud that tasted like nutella to make yummy.

Tuesday, 4 April 2017

The House on the Hill


The white sheep and the grey rabbit and the brown duck and the red hen And they New the white sheeps house is Broken Should we Surprise he Wolf a New house no the Top of the hill She will be so happy That she has another house.

Thursday, 9 February 2017

Chicken worms

WALT: write quality introductions.


Image attribution: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/34/Brown_rice_2.jpg


Do you know what chicken worms taste like?This morning Mr Goodwin went a bit crazy, because he tried to feed us chicken worms.Keep reading to find out what happened.

Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task Description: We had to write an introduction about eating chicken flavoured worms but they were actually noddles.