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Monday, 26 June 2017

The jungle frogs

The jungle frogs


Mother frog said I want to lay my eggs in the river but. I can't because starfish will eat my eggs and. They will die by the frog came up. With the idea I will make a little pool for your. Eggs and the fish kant get in the pool yes you are clever. Father frog father frog said it is dane said father frog. Thank you father frog you are so clever.

Wednesday, 21 June 2017

Baby bear’s hiding place

Baby bear’s hiding place


Father bear is going to find some berries baby bear said can I come to yes said Father beer get your basket and let's go say bye to mother bear Baby bear said come on father beer I want to get the berries father by said wait I can't run fast because my leg is sore from Be4 When I was going fishing I fell in the pool and The Rock hit my hand and it was very sweet Ok father bear I will wait for you to go to the burrito teer Ba ba ba we are at the berry bush Street Pharmacy and get your basket and follow up with the berries bbb climb the tree and there was a hole in the Berry tree he climbed up the tree and hide in it Bible verses come on baby bear we are going Home hardware store baby girls basket on the floor by the cheaper maybe feel like that father and father PR got scared and baby girl jumped out on father bear and father bear got a fright

Thursday, 15 June 2017

Subtraction - jump the line

Haircut

Haircut

Sam Is getting a haircut haircut shop He said he wants a mohawk haircut do he's so brushes and sprays and scissors and haircut and you was here and it went up and down it looked cool you jumped on it and went down and then the lady put it back up again and it was finished he was very happy and then he went home and then he had lunch and he play with his friends and all it's getting dark and he went home and had enough and that was that in the end.


Wednesday, 14 June 2017

Subtraction Word Problems

Chug the tractor

Chug the tractor


Chug the tractor helped on the farm he was a good on the farm bat one day Chug was going up the hill he said i can’t go  up the hill i am  to  old the man put Chug in the shed Chug saw a big new tractor in the shed the new  tractor  said you are to old you  are going to the dump the  farm man put Chug on the back of the truck the farm man went pots the Bump and pasta shops and the houses he went into the park and there was a Place for chunk and I said my name is there and they made me new and all the kids was playing on me the In end.

Tuesday, 13 June 2017

The castle



I made my sandcastle with my sister I bought Seashells on my castle I like put heaps on my  castle My sister doesn't even know how to do but she just help me with the Seashells The castle was getting higher and higher And my sand castle was getting bigger and bigger And then the castle was done The water came up to the castle but the castle was too strong the water the Little Bus the car seat down

Monday, 12 June 2017

Tiger runs away

My cat run away i think Tiger runs away because he did like the new house Tiger saw the door open he jumped away from me Tiger come back i run out to get Tiger bat he was gone it was getting dark i wrote to go the fand Tiger bat my mum said kam on kohatu it your Bedtime we will look of Tiger tomorrow  said mum we                                                                                 are Going to our old house to get a host Mum Mum I found tiger she's on my screen We are going home now.                      

Tuesday, 6 June 2017

bingo goes to school


Mum said sam we are having a pet's day at school on saturday can bingo came to school yes said mum i will come and help you look after him bingo said you can Come to school with me on Sunday but you will have to be a good dog  bingo jumped up at sam sit Bingo sit please be a good i am going naw he won winning a medw  go home

Wednesday, 3 May 2017

Little chimp


The Little chimp was going Home But he saw a honey tree He went to it The Little chimp saw yellow stuff he Tasted some mmmm he Grand Lost And the bees were flying past Puppies were going to get the Honey back but the Monkey was Gone he was full He gave the rest to the Monkey The end


Tuesday, 2 May 2017

Mother duck


Mother duck sat in the tree and her 10 eggs hatch in the tree. Mother duck jump out of the tree with her baby ducks. 5 ducks ran away and mother duck had to find them.Daddy duck came back with 5 baby ducklings.

Wednesday, 12 April 2017

the lion and therabbit


I am hungry said the lion i am going to get a rabbit Roar he get a  rabbit it was a fat one he eat it he was a beer away  the lion went the beer didn't see the lion Coming the  lion eat ti.

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Tim and michael was going to play in the pool but  the pool was Doodle sow Tim and michael can’t play in the  pool  they went inside.

Friday, 7 April 2017

Eating Insects

Have you ever tasted a cricket before this morning Mrs Stickland said we were going to eat chocolate flavoured mud with crickets, I thought she was lying!


I was shocked when I saw it had eyes and I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough  to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like cornflakes.


I’m not sure how many i ate but it was a lot. Luckily Mrs Stickland had chocolate mud that tasted like nutella to make yummy.

Tuesday, 4 April 2017

The House on the Hill


The white sheep and the grey rabbit and the brown duck and the red hen And they New the white sheeps house is Broken Should we Surprise he Wolf a New house no the Top of the hill She will be so happy That she has another house.

Thursday, 9 February 2017

Chicken worms

WALT: write quality introductions.


Image attribution: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/34/Brown_rice_2.jpg


Do you know what chicken worms taste like?This morning Mr Goodwin went a bit crazy, because he tried to feed us chicken worms.Keep reading to find out what happened.

Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task Description: We had to write an introduction about eating chicken flavoured worms but they were actually noddles.