Hey Kohatu, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your diagram because you have included some evidence of why you agree or disagree with that. I also like how you have made the text easy and clear to read.
This reminded me of when I did something like this for writing where we had to write like a persuasive text why we agree or disagree that the 3 little pigs were bad or the big bad wolf was the baddy.
I think that maybe next time you should make the images a bit clearer or make sure they aren't blurry because I can't really read it. Also maybe write a bit about why you did that, speaking of which, why did you do this? Awesome work?
Hey Kohatu, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your diagram because you have included some evidence of why you agree or disagree with that. I also like how you have made the text easy and clear to read.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of when I did something like this for writing where we had to write like a persuasive text why we agree or disagree that the 3 little pigs were bad or the big bad wolf was the baddy.
I think that maybe next time you should make the images a bit clearer or make sure they aren't blurry because I can't really read it. Also maybe write a bit about why you did that, speaking of which, why did you do this? Awesome work?
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
good.
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