Showing posts with label 2017. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2017. Show all posts
Tuesday, 12 December 2017
Wednesday, 22 November 2017
Monday, 20 November 2017
Wednesday, 18 October 2017
Wednesday, 6 September 2017
Tuesday, 5 September 2017
My Weekend
On Saturday I went to mcdonalds with my mum and sister. I bought a BIG MAC and a chocolate shake. While I was waiting for the food I played in the Big boy park. I saw my friend at mcdonalds with his mum and sister. We played together on the park like besties. We ate our food together, and we played on the park after. I also went home for a sleep.
Wednesday, 21 June 2017
Baby bear’s hiding place
Baby bear’s hiding place
Father bear is going to find some berries baby bear said can I come to yes said Father beer get your basket and let's go say bye to mother bear Baby bear said come on father beer I want to get the berries father by said wait I can't run fast because my leg is sore from Be4 When I was going fishing I fell in the pool and The Rock hit my hand and it was very sweet Ok father bear I will wait for you to go to the burrito teer Ba ba ba we are at the berry bush Street Pharmacy and get your basket and follow up with the berries bbb climb the tree and there was a hole in the Berry tree he climbed up the tree and hide in it Bible verses come on baby bear we are going Home hardware store baby girls basket on the floor by the cheaper maybe feel like that father and father PR got scared and baby girl jumped out on father bear and father bear got a fright
Friday, 16 June 2017
Wednesday, 3 May 2017
Little chimp
The Little chimp was going Home But he saw a honey tree He went to it The Little chimp saw yellow stuff he Tasted some mmmm he Grand Lost And the bees were flying past Puppies were going to get the Honey back but the Monkey was Gone he was full He gave the rest to the Monkey The end
Friday, 7 April 2017
Eating Insects
Have you ever tasted a cricket before this morning Mrs Stickland said we were going to eat chocolate flavoured mud with crickets, I thought she was lying!
I was shocked when I saw it had eyes and I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like cornflakes.
I’m not sure how many i ate but it was a lot. Luckily Mrs Stickland had chocolate mud that tasted like nutella to make yummy.
I was shocked when I saw it had eyes and I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like cornflakes.
I’m not sure how many i ate but it was a lot. Luckily Mrs Stickland had chocolate mud that tasted like nutella to make yummy.
Thursday, 9 February 2017
Chicken worms
WALT: write quality introductions.
Image attribution: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/34/Brown_rice_2.jpg
Do you know what chicken worms taste like?This morning Mr Goodwin went a bit crazy, because he tried to feed us chicken worms.Keep reading to find out what happened.
Introduction Rubric
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Hook
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My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
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My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
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My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
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When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
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Orientation
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My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
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My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
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My audience is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
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Task Description: We had to write an introduction about eating chicken flavoured worms but they were actually noddles.
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