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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 9 September 2020

Royal Military Parade



I watched the video of the Royal Military Parade in honour of his majesty king Tupou Vi Birthday. The army and Royal bands marched the street of Tonga up to the royal palace.

Thursday, 18 June 2020

biomes


A biome is an area of the planet that can be classified according to the plants and animals that live in it
A large group of similar ecosystems
Marine Biome largest covers 70%-salt water
of the earths surfuce
fish ,seahorses,octopus,seals,whale+heaps

Tuesday, 19 November 2019

How to be a good son



Title How to be a good son

introduction
Do u want to know how to be a good son? To be a good sun is to listen to your mum or dad


Cherish the time you have with your parents. The time you have with your parents is short and precious, so make the most of it.Showing respect to your family makes you a good son. And to respect You need to be Helpful and Don't talk back to your family, When they are talking you need to show respect. And What your parents give you something you have to like it. If you are sad you can go to your parents like your mum or dad you can talk to before of them. 

Thursday, 25 July 2019

What is Persuasion?

today in writing we were learning about Persuasion I made a wordle to show what I have learnt from the video we watched in class.

Thursday, 20 June 2019

My House

My House

My house is cool. It is my favourite place.

Gaming
I am allowed to watch Youtube and it is cool. My favourite thing to watch is people playing Fortnite. I also like to play games on my phone. My favourite game to play is a ball game where you start at the top and have to get the ball to the bottom.

My Sister.
My sister and I, like to play games together. Our favourite game to play is hide and seek. I am always the winner because she doesn’t know where the good spots are. She also lets me use her iPad when my phone is flat.

My house is a great place. What do you like about your house?

Wednesday, 17 October 2018

i am looking for Term 4

Walt: use correct sentences to help structure our writing.

I Really want to get a goals on art.


I want to learn more about art.

.Because I like cool painting.and

reading because i like book. To bat cool book.

I think That term Four is going to be cool..


Tuesday, 1 August 2017

Tiger runs away

Tiger runs away

This is your new home tiger he did not like the new house tiger ran out the door she said tiger tiger dot go tiger went she went to find tiger s he was cried and cried we wow go to the owd house i forgot the hose we are going naw it a long way i am going to play on the swing mum mum i find tiger you are going home.  

Friday, 7 April 2017

Eating Insects

Have you ever tasted a cricket before this morning Mrs Stickland said we were going to eat chocolate flavoured mud with crickets, I thought she was lying!


I was shocked when I saw it had eyes and I realised we were going to eat crickets. When I picked one up I felt a bit sick but I was brave enough  to put it in my mouth. It was crunchy like cornflakes.


I’m not sure how many i ate but it was a lot. Luckily Mrs Stickland had chocolate mud that tasted like nutella to make yummy.

Thursday, 9 February 2017

Chicken worms

WALT: write quality introductions.


Image attribution: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/34/Brown_rice_2.jpg


Do you know what chicken worms taste like?This morning Mr Goodwin went a bit crazy, because he tried to feed us chicken worms.Keep reading to find out what happened.

Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task Description: We had to write an introduction about eating chicken flavoured worms but they were actually noddles. 

Tuesday, 22 November 2016

Softball at Kiwi sports.

What skills did we learn today?
Catch the balls and play another games.

We learnt how to play softball and catch a ball.

What games did we do?
My favourite was the base race And the space race.

What did I like the most?
Throwing the ball to AJ.